Wednesday, July 30, 2014

Edwin Duran

Edwin  Duran                                                                                                                         7/14/14

All Summer In A Day

 

A group of children who live on Venus where it always rains have never seen the

Sun, everyone except a girl named Margot.

Margot stood apart from the other children. The reason why she stood apart is

because, Margot used to live on Earth. She used to experience the Sun, something the other

children only dreamed about. The other children couldn't remember a day where it didn't

rain.

Margot used to talk about the Sun. She used to talk about how it looks and feels. The

other children would get jealous because they felt like she was bragging it upon them. The

children eventually start to hate and bully her. They call her names and mistreat her. Also

the Scientists on TV predicted that the Sun will come out today, the first time in 7 years!

While the Sun starts to come out the children start to bully Margot and throw her in

a closet. The children were jealous of her because she has already experienced the Sun. The

Sun comes out and all the children go outside to play and forget about Margot. While the

children are playing the mood and surrounding changes. They notice that locking Margot in

the closet was an awful, terrible thing to do.

Experiences like that can change people. Jealousy and Bullying not only hurts the

person you are mean to but also yourself.

 

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